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Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:55 am ]
Post subject:  Typos

Hi Dan, sorry if you think i'm being pedantic but I just noticed some typos in the game. When you complete the "Investigate An Anomaly", the game says:

"Your have collected a wealth of data on the anomaly, and return with your findings."

I'm guessing the missing words from the above description are "crew" and "you"

"Your crew have collected a wealth of data on the anomaly, and you return with your findings."

Or alternatively you could change it and say ship or vessel, or even make it specific to the current size of your ship.

"Your ship has collected a wealth of data on the anomaly, and you return with your findings."
"Your vessel has collected a wealth of data on the anomaly, and you return with your findings."
"Your Frigate has collected a wealth of data on the anomaly, and you return with your findings."

...

Also, the new Zolazin Analyzer is labelled as "Zolazin Anayzer" when you hover over the brown cup thing image to see the object artwork.

Author:  tk3 [ Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:21 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I was just about to mention the analyzer (anayzer). :D

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:56 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Found another one, Dan, this time on the new Zolazin mission.

When you complete, it you get the message:

You continue follow the Glaviz ships...

Change it to:

You continue to follow the Glaviz ships...

Author:  SpoonyJank [ Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I'd like to see aliens with very poor grammar in the future... Only the evil ones though.

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I guess i'm evil then. Just noticed a typo in my own post. :P :oops:

Author:  SpoonyJank [ Fri Jul 23, 2010 2:30 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Matress_of_evil wrote:
I guess i'm evil then. Just noticed a typo in my own post. :P :oops:


Hmm... Do you reside in the USA without a green card? Sometimes I pretend to point and scream like the aliens in the movie "Body Snatchers". Usually it ends up me pointing at somebody and screaming all by myself though... Rather awkward.

Author:  webguydan [ Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:59 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Thanks for the heads up :)

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:35 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

No green card mate. I'm from the UK.

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Thanks, Dan. :)

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:25 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I've found another one, Dan.

The T.O. Force Barrier description says it is used on the Stelar Command Center. But the enemy name is actually Stalar Command Center. Which is correct?

Author:  Soozerama [ Sat Oct 23, 2010 5:03 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

What are you an English teacher or something? Quit noticing!!!!

Clam dwan I's just teasing, remember your motto....

"Anyone without a sense of humour is truly at the mercy of the rest of us."

xoxo -da Sooz

Author:  webguydan [ Sat Oct 23, 2010 5:53 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Fixed the typo in the Barrier. Thanks again!

Author:  ExSeaD [ Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:04 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I invented a new mission! typo hunting mission. :D

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:24 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Nah i'm not an English teacher. I just like reading. And when I read, I notice things...

I always think correct English is important in a game anyway. I can think of several examples of "real" games where I have noticed typos.

Ensuring typos are fixed helps to give the game more polish and makes it look more professional. I'm just doing my part to make Galaxy Legion even better than it already is. :mrgreen:

Author:  ODragon [ Mon Nov 15, 2010 4:29 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Sort of typo... The Lazuli Parts Vault description ends in two periods instead of one.

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Wed Nov 17, 2010 9:24 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Found another one. The new mission description on the News page says this:

The Game wrote:
The Terran Outsiders have begun their Era of Harvest, a focused period of colonization and growth that escalates during this galactic cycle. With border disputes reaching new heights, officials has asked for assistance to halt any Harvester vessels that wander into nearby territory.

Change "has" to "have".

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I've found another typo, Dan. It's in the description of the Drannik Ballistae.

Quote:
Originally, the Drannik built these massive guns as planetary assualt weapons. The drones later reconfigured them for ship-to-ship combat, which require powerful energy sources to maintain.
"assualt" should be assault.

Author:  webguydan [ Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:14 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Done. Once again, good eye. :)

Author:  ODragon [ Thu Dec 23, 2010 11:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Gravitic Amplifier -Uses a planet's intense gravity as a barrier against attackers, permanently boosting its defense by 100. Usable on planets that are Very Large or Greater size.

I think in is missing from this sentence in the actual description.

Usable on planets that are Very Large or Greater in size.

Alternatively,

Usable on planets with Very Large or Greater size.

Author:  webguydan [ Thu Dec 23, 2010 11:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

I've updated it to the former. Thanks!

Author:  Matress_of_evil [ Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:07 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Typos

Found another one, Dan. :P

I've been fighting a Graxis Prison, and it lowered my defences by 40%. However, in my Ship's Log, it states "The Glaxis disrupts your systems, lowering your defense by 40% for 30 minutes."

Is it Graxis or Glaxis?

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