Well after the helping i think you should do a battle thing

it will be about the Geth in Mass Effect 1 and 2. (they are robots used for war but they had there own mind and turned evil. The Aquariums (i think) made them.

Well there will be 9 chapters

1 First Contact

2 The war begins

3 undercover

4 assassination

5 Sabotage

6 Planetary assualt

7 Invasion

8 New technology

9 war ends

ill put the other details in later

im all for a war scenario for the next biweekly. but i think because of copyright infringement we cant directly copy mass effect. plus we already have 2 machine based races, Vygoids, which are straight up cyborgs, and the Zolazin which are androids. id much rather have an insect based race to play with. either that, or some kind of steam-punk race that decided to have a full out war with space pirates.

Yea I want a Insect like race as well. Or a Natural kind of looking race.

what do you mean by a natural looking race? lol, everything we have so far is humanoid...

Cyborg or Humanoid. Cyborgs look humanoid but I count them as a separate section. But yes maybe an Insectoid race... like Invasion Defense for their ability? I kinda want a race like that.

everything we have so far is humanoid. the term humanoid is a description of the physiological representation of the alien. if it has 2 arms, 2 legs, 2 eyes, a nose, a mouth, etc. its a humanoid. its based on the human form. games and movies rarely portray characters as non humanoid, but i believe mass effect had several non humanoid characters, which was cool to see. i understand that dan wont be able to create non humanoid characters, based on his admission that he purchases 3d models and modifies them slightly (as you can see with the octafari-kronyn models) but thats not really an issue. people relate much better to humanoid characters than non humanoid characters because if they dont look like a person, then they are automatically catagorized as an animal, and therefor are subconciously placed on a lower plane of worth than a being that looks similar.

Yea but thats their form, do vygoids have eyes... a nose.... no they have sensors.

I think we need some nifty new alien races. Non humanoid would be nice. A great storyline to go with it would be nice too. Besides, this idea is based too much off of something already done before. I think a revisit of an old mission chain would be cool too. Here are some outlines I've thought of.

Revenge of the Stryll: War between the Stryll and Genetarr. When the Matriarch is mysteriously killed, which side will you support?

Return of the Prejor: Why are they back? And what are they running from?

The Octafari Attack: Their first plan didn't work, and now they are back with a slightly more sinister agenda in mind...

The Lazuli Civil War: The Syndicate is furious at the treasonous attitude of some of their members. Now the two sides are locked in bitter combat.

The Drannik Dilemma: The Drannik are being assaulted by a new generation of their former drones. Can they survive?

The Glaviz Experiment: The Glaviz want help again, and you are offering it. But will your assistance doom all space faring races to a new era of barbarism?

Good ideas right?

Humanoid


NON Humanoid





there arnt alot of examples, the elcor and the 'thing' are vaguely humanoid. but the blob is probably the best example of a non humanoid alien ive seen.

No, this is the best non-humanoid example.

id like to see a chain where the stryll, octafari, and zolazins team up to try to conquar the galaxy

and prejor

One problem, the Zolazin are a playable race, giving credence to the fact they aren't as evil as they were before you finished the mission.

i want the next one to be a weekly involving the prejor since there mission chain ends so abruptly.

i never did it, i was around when it started but never did it

They definitely need to revisit the Prejor, but maybe not now. I liked how this one seemed a little more unusual, with a message from the future. It'd be cool to have more things like that, such as inter-dimensional beings or other oddities.

then yea a insectoid war let me just change it up a bit

so 10 chapters

1 first encounter- A new species has been found in sector 586 of Milky way. Go to it and try to make contact with the species. This could bring a alliance to help in the future. Our survival for the future is in your hands. Don't fail us.

Cost 25 energy-0/50 ends on 10 completions
Reward on completion-Planetary Structure: Communication line size: 6 Defense: 400 Limit 2 per planet

2 NAP request-Thanks to you we know they are a insect species called Scrin. Set up a NAP so we are one step closer to our goal to become there allies. Wish you luck on this important task.

Cost 25 energy-0/50 ends on 4 completions
Reward on completion-Ship Module: Quantum Eco Engine size: 15 defense 50 energy 30 limit 4

3 Denial-The Scrin Declined our NAP. They sent us a message saying "We the Scrin don't need any allies. We survived many wars with our advanced technology. Your decline will be our up rise upon this new galaxy." You must attack there scouts to protect our home world.

Cost 25 energy-0/100 ends on 4 completions
Reward on completion-Ship module: Scrin Super Scanner Size 40 Scan 150

4 Starting the fight-Our attack on there scouts was a good plan. Reports shows they found an enemy base before they sent these scouts. the surface of the planet is Scorched and is back to it original state... lava. hold them off while your leaders send a warning message to all other races of the galaxy.

costs 25 energy-0/50 ends on 10 completions
Reward on completion-NPC fight:Scrin Fighter (Standard)-Drops Scrin Data base: Fills your research all the way full

5 Breeder-We manage to send the warning to every species but the Scrin sent us another message saying "You may of survived or first wave and that was just a test. Prepare for your challenge." This doesn't sound good. We need you to beat there next wave.

Cost 25 energy-0/60 ends on 10 completion
Reward on completion-planetary council: political council attack 400 defense 400 limit 1 per base

6 Mother ship-Congratulations, you manage to hold back there second wave, but turns out they were just decoys. the mother ship sent them so it can recharge and is sending a full scaled invasion at our home planet. your job is to scan for the mother ship.we will hold off the attacks until you find it.

cost 25 energy-0/50 ends on 10 completions
Reward on completion-???? couldn't think of one (you make one up for it)

7 Infiltration-Since you found mother ship infiltrate it. Do not get caught. Scan there technology and sabotage there weapons. All information you gather will bring us closer to wining the war. We depend on you.

cost 25 energy-0/100 ends on 2 completions
Reward on completion-Ship module: Scrin Particle Beam size 60 attack 250 limit 2 per ship

8 Hive Queen-You've discovered the Queen, and millions of eggs are ready to hatch and become the new fighters. Plant omicron devices and blow this place sky high. Hide them well.

cost 25 energy-0/50 ends on 10 completion
Reward on completion-Artifact: Hive Egg Sac adds 20 tactical officers (20 more if you have battled 1000 times.)

9 Ending the fight-As your about to get off the mother ship the queen spotted you. She sends 10 guards and herself to get you. You have no choice but to activate the time on the bombs before you get off. you have 20 seconds to get out. As you hit the escape button the bombs set off.

cost 25 energy-0/200 ends on 1 completions
Reward on completion-NPC battle: Queen's Super ship (Elite)-drops Queen's Super Weapon size 10 attack 1000

10/Epilogue Detonation-after destroying the mother ship the Scrin retreat back to there old galaxy. You manage to stop there universal domination. Now destroy there remaining fleet to show them power isn't everything.

cost 25 energy-0/20 ends on 20 completion
Rewards on completion 1,000,000 credits/Quassi Special Expander 75%/25% (this one was random. You can change this one if you want to.


Well here it is. I know the 0/100 and the 0/200 parts may be going over board or is too much but i do my best. I'll allow you to change it up, add more, Etc. Just can you put my name on for some credit? That would be all i want.

Not trying to be mean but dont take my spotlight here i got this idea jk

if scrin is from a game then sorry i didnt know. if it is change it to whatever you think off best i got is adding *er* to harvest making harvester. harvest is a planet name in halo wars

Scrin is from the Command & Conquer series. From the fact that you specifically pointed out "game" and not "somewhere" is indicative of your knowledge of this.